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1 Poetry Thread on Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:02 am

Fuzz94

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So me and Rome and klok (not sure who really) kinda had this idea.

Rules:
1. Make it at least 4 lines
2. No bullshit, this is serious poetry, not "Your topic is gay anal sex"
3. Stay on topic of whatever is given, dont stray off with it.
4. Don't make topics rude or hurtful, that's what the dis raps thread is for.
5. Any Rhyme Scheme
6. Every 4th person picks a new topic. (i.e Rome writes poem, the Fuzz, then Mew, then Klok. Klok picks the next topic. Rome writes on new topic.)
7. If the 4th person wants to keep the same topic, they can.
8. If you have some poem you wrote and want to share, just say in the post first that it's something else you wrote.
9. The topic has to be something peaceful. Angry poems are more suited for dis raps, so this is a more peaceful version.


I'm retarded. Here is a place to share poetry of any kind about anything. I might throw some lyrics I wrote for songs as well just because it fits.



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2 Re: Poetry Thread on Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:15 am

Mercenary Lord

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Oh, I was just gonna post something I had written a bit ago. :/

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3 Re: Poetry Thread on Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:16 am

Fuzz94

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eh, go for it lol, just state that its something different.

4 Re: Poetry Thread on Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:28 am

Mercenary Lord

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I met her once, and once again,
In my mind, and in the glen.
She spoke first, to break the quiet,
but in doing so, I took her for a piet.

But the more we talked,
and the more we walked,
The less I judged,
And the more we nudged.

Fast forward five years.
She's none of my fears.
We're happy, together in space,
set against all the rest of the human race.
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I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M DOING

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5 Re: Poetry Thread on Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:56 am

Primefusion

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Perfection of both mind and body.
The herald of infatuation.
Maybe even love.
Time spent together causes
the heart to crash thunderously.
Soon only the cacophony of
that which is within can be heard.

But this raw emotion, this singular
thought of someone means nothing.
Not unless it is acted upon.

And so you find yourself on
the other side of the glass.
Looking on as they slip away.
And as the ice begins to
melt around your being only
one thing is felt.

Regret.

6 Re: Poetry Thread on Sun Dec 30, 2012 4:03 am

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So I was asked to make some poetry,
But my fellow forumers don't know what's free,
So I'mma show 'em that the listenin' breeze
Is about to get blocked by trees.

Now, back seven years ago, when I was nothin' but ten,
I met this really fine girl who I couldn't help but love.
Everything about her made me want to release some doves.
I never said much of nothin' 'cause ya'll know me well.
Two years later I had an accident,
That lost my memories and since,
I'm still recoverin'.
About a month after, a white plummed dove
Arrived, along with a mem'ry swell.
When I found her in a pinch,
She was near downing a bottle of sleepers.
I begged her why,
Said I wouldn't understand her
Or her lies.
But I knew the truth, and understood the woes,
And three years later, her depressions was in it's death throes.
But about this time, it was all for naught.
She disappeared, and I was alone.
Since, I've spent the past two years searching,
For the girl who tied the red string's knot.
So I'm reaping what I've sown,
And hoping to hear that singing
Before my dieing breath.


Since my rhyme schemes are always weird as fudgeballs, here's that, if anyone is picky:
Spoiler:
So I was asked to make some poetry, (a)
But my fellow forumers don't know what's free, (a)
So I'mma show 'em that the listenin' breeze (a)
Is about to get blocked by trees. (a)

Now, back seven years ago, when I was nothin' but ten, (b)
I met this really fine girl who I couldn't help but love. (c)
Everything about her made me want to release some doves. (c)
I never said much of nothin' 'cause ya'll know me well. (d)
Two years later I had an accident, (b)
That lost my memories and since, (e)
I'm still recoverin'. (b)
About a month after, a white plummed dove (c)
Arrived, along with a mem'ry swell. (d)
When I found her in a pinch, (e)
She was near downing a bottle of sleepers. (f)
I begged her why, (g)
Said I wouldn't understand her (f)
Or her lies. (g)
But I knew the truth, and understood the woes, (h)
And three years later, her depressions was in it's death throes. (h)
But about this time, it was all for naught. (i)
She disappeared, and I was alone. (j)
Since, I've spent the past two years searching, (k)
For the girl who tied the red string's knot. (i)
So I'm reaping what I've sown, (j)
And hoping to hear that singing (k)
Before my dieing breath. (-)

7 Re: Poetry Thread on Sun Dec 30, 2012 4:37 am

Magix430

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True love is infinite
Divine and unending,
Soul supported
Straight from the heart;
Like a silver strand
Drifting in the air,
Shining and independent
But strangely dependent
On itself --

Like a string in a web
Undisturbed and bonding
Of many another element
In a tightness of truth
And honesty and reliance.

But webs can be disturbed
Strands can be broken
Tragedies can happen
And love can break

No love is true
No love can be truly supported
By mere words, by simple gifts

The true love comes from the stars
From the celestial beings
Where once they bestow us with
The qualities of angels in love
Next can they toy with us
And break our hearts like glass

(I'm not sure if this is what you meant but these sorta described my feelings during a sorta-sorta relationship)

Next: Hatred

8 Re: Poetry Thread on Mon Dec 31, 2012 1:11 am

Fuzz94

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Don't do hatred, pick a happy topic.

Dis Raps is for hatred and negativity

And I'll write a love poem.

Normally, I'm loud and obnoxious
Sometimes I'm the only one that seems to be conscious
But when I look at her, i cant even think
It's like every thought process vanished in a blink
In my life, I've seen plenty of pretty girls
But I look at you and my head gets the whirls
The wind blows through your hair
But I can't structure a sentence, this just isn't fair
Usually I'm witty and clever
But now any joke I think of will take forever
Mind blown by everything about you
Can't look into the future without thinkin about you
"Oh, wow. Don't you look great"
"How about sometime we go out on a date"
Just somethings I want to say
But I open my mouth it dosen't come out that way
I can tell you've got some feelings back, im not headed for sorrow
shit, I'll finally get the guts to say it tomorrow.



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9 Re: Poetry Thread on Mon Dec 31, 2012 1:17 am

Magix430

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Fine then.

I choose abstract topics, so by hatred, I really meant it as a concept and not as a true central topic but sure.

How bout...

Reminiscence.

10 Re: Poetry Thread on Mon Dec 31, 2012 1:51 am

Fuzz94

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Yeah that works.

I feel like writing about hatred would end up with someone writing an angry poem.

Maybe we'll try it later.

11 Re: Poetry Thread on Wed Jan 16, 2013 10:27 pm

Fuzz94

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In an attempt to bring it back, I'll do a new topic. (sorry magix for shooting you down)

Topic: Love poem to Klok.

My dearest kreator of this forum,
which lures me from sheer bordem
this is my favorite web site
want to go on a date tonight?
I'll pick you up in 5
we'll be two bees in a hive
i hope you're not a robot
because i think you're hot
ill put my coat over a puddle
and then you and I can cuddle
i hope this starts a trend
will you please be my boyfriend

12 Re: Poetry Thread on Wed Jan 16, 2013 10:33 pm

Klokinator

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Excuse me sir, you are a gentle fag
A man who creeps me out, a man with no swag
I'm not gay, bi, or even a lesbian
I'm a man with a horsecock, the king of inception

And uh that's all this was gaaaay.

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13 Re: Poetry Thread on Sat Jan 19, 2013 8:40 pm

Magix430

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Must this be a game?
I just find this lame.
When we can find the time
To make a stanza with some rhyme

Why can't this just be a thread
Where poems of all types be read,
With eagerness, boredom alike,
I'd rather that be the new hike.

14 Re: Poetry Thread on Mon Jan 21, 2013 9:27 pm

Fuzz94

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*Update* Magix is right, this shouldn't be a game. Feel free to write/share any poetry here.

15 Re: Poetry Thread on Tue Jan 22, 2013 6:04 pm

Magix430

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There once was a wise sir named fuzz
Who raised up and caused a smart buzz
With few words to say
And had tragedy to pay
He remade the thread, just cuz.

16 Re: Poetry Thread on Tue Jan 22, 2013 6:45 pm

Fuzz94

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there was a boy made of magic
who's posts tend to be tragic
but oh mamaia
what and idea
poetry thread revived by magix

17 Re: Poetry Thread on Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:04 pm

Magix430

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There once was an intelligent bard
Who could flow music with lard.
And with a "jackass"
And shit loads of sass
He fucked up his rhyme and decided to correct fuzz that it's "what an idea" and not "what and idea".

And here as a payment,
For all that I have meant.
For I failed at rhyming in this sentence,
Please accept my pentinence.

I do not know what pentinence means
Nor do I care for I use what I can glean.

18 Re: Poetry Thread on Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:09 pm

Fuzz94

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Magix my good boy you've saved the day
and saved me from my typoing way
so from this point on i will type no flaws
and my rhymes will be as sharp as claws

19 Re: Poetry Thread on Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:11 pm

Magix430

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why good sir i plead you not
To give me high praise - it makes me rot
I am but a bard of the land,
A simple composer with tasks at hand.

20 Re: Poetry Thread on Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:12 pm

Yoshi

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Admin
Beans, beans,
they're good for your heart.
The more you eat,
the more you fart.

21 Re: Poetry Thread on Tue Jan 22, 2013 10:23 pm

Jesse

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I always heard

Beans, beans,
The musical fruit.
The more you eat,
the more you toot.
The more you toot,
The better you feel,
So eat those beans
At every meal.

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