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1 Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Mon Dec 10, 2012 12:35 am

Fuzz94

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Yeah so I have lots of shit here.

Most of these were made with Dimensional Rift in mind, so there are hardly any OCs

These are LOLable. But we all start somewhere
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Isaac, Golden Sun

Crono, Chrono Trigger

Riku, Kingdom Hearts

Zero, Megaman X. Used as a joke for my mug in MoH

Well these are also LOLable, but they're better at least.
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Zappa, Chrono Cross

Jenna, Golden Sun

Some more sub-par sprites, except for Sheik.
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Link, the Legend of Zelda

Laura, FE10

Gatrie, FE9-10

Marle, Chrono Trigger

Sheik. The Legend of Zelda, Ocarina of Time.

These are in the middle of LOLable and good, it was kind of a gap.
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Glenn, Chrono Cross... failure

Isaac, Lost Magic...If anyone knows that game.

A personal mug, it needs a revamp.

Made this Isaac Battle Sprite. Sprite was good, animation was not, lol
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These ended up in DR, team worked by me and Subieko. I like these, except for Riku.
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Isaac Revamp.

Zappa Revamp.

Gatrie Revamp.

Riku Revamp.

Glenn Revamp.

Some other stuff made in that time period
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Personal Mug for Arngrim the Berserker. He helped a bit.

Princess Zelda. Twilight Princess version.

A boss for DR and a Splice comp at FEShrine


History of the Splice Competition
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Project 76 sprites
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Dax

Orlan

Olena

Some of My Favorites Very Happy
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Looking for Critique on these



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2 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:06 am

Charlotte

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As a birthday present, I'm going to tear apart your sprites; you're welcome?

First sprite, head is big and forward, bangs have barely any shadow in the middle, one piece of bangs goes in a huge diagonal line \, hair on the right (OPV) sweeps left for no discernible reason, cloak parts don't shade each other or the clothes, strand of hair on far left is oddly shaped, random pixel on top right of cloak.

Second sprite, tiny head, dark right eye (OPV), third shade of the cloak doesn't mesh well with the outline, left collar has one random dark pixel to the right of it, tie pins are different and the tie itself is like, not shaded, chunk of shadow in the bottom left.

Or something, I dunno what I'm talking about. Just bored.

3 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:46 am

Klokinator

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Couldn't view even one of these on job corps internet. On thwe plus side, college internet is t0tally uncensored :O

Might use that later instead.

http://klokreations.forumotion.com

4 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:55 pm

felix198

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With as much as Char has said my only critique would be to change the color of the second guy's cloak entirely. Toned puce is neither a threatening nor aesthetically pleasing color to me. And he seems like bad-ass of sorts. But that's just my opinion, you do whatevah you want.

5 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:06 pm

Fuzz94

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Thanks Char Very Happy Ill get to the other guy later

6 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Mon Dec 10, 2012 8:59 pm

Yoshi

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I like how the homepage says this thread is

"Fuzz Actual Star..."

Which I find amazing.

Lucius needs more AA in dat hair and cape.

7 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Mon Dec 10, 2012 9:47 pm

L95

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His clothes are pillowy overall.

8 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:36 pm

Fuzz94

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@Yoshi yeahhhhhh my bad lol

@L95, I'll get on that Very Happy

9 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:43 pm

Charlotte

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...I love how I spend two massive runons on all the little details, then L95 has 5 words to give way more generally helpful advice XD

...Though I'm finding new things to nitpick on, but I'll wait for you to finish.

10 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Tue Dec 11, 2012 2:56 am

Mew

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Bah what is wrong with me IM SORRY PLEASE DONT THINK ME RUDE

I brought it into my program to zoom in to see it better and I just went crazy editing for a bit :c You had like 30 colors so I decided to fix that, now it's at 15+1.



I didn't fix everything but I noticed the character's name is Olena...this is a female right? I gave her some pretty lips to make her less trap-y and some new eyes for less Lucius. o3o I smoothed out the left part of the hair that looked like it had weird hair spray holding it against gravity, but the right side of her head OPV has a diagonal line in it that needs to be smoothed out. And of course I changed the palette haha 'cause that damn hair color. You can use this or just ref it if you wish I don't care, it's still full of things that need attention, the clothing is pretty pillowy fo sho and I believe that her head still does seem a bit forwrd, might wanna bring the head a pixel to the right? That might fix it.

But I believe it does solve a couple things we've been mentioning so at least now you know. ouo Hope it halps.

http://www.margosikes.com

11 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Tue Dec 11, 2012 4:09 pm

Fuzz94

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Thanks mew Very Happy (I'm just gonna go ahead and leave you're edits while I work on the clothes and then give you credit for it Smile )

12 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Tue Dec 11, 2012 5:04 pm

Yoshi

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If you're goin with Mew's, I suggest you fix dat nose.

13 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Tue Dec 11, 2012 7:38 pm

Fuzz94

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will do~

14 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Tue Dec 11, 2012 11:19 pm

Mew

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yeah lol its real pointy I noticed that after I posted it :< I think it was a remnant from the splice I did with the eyes

http://www.margosikes.com

15 Re: Fuzz Actually Starts a Sprite thread on Wed Dec 12, 2012 9:24 am

Fuzz94

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nose and clothes fixed... kinda

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