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101 Re: Mew Art on Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:27 pm

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I've made progress on this, but before I feel confident that I can finish it, I want some more crit on it if possible, I'm lookin' at you Primey


and a couple things I realize are issuse at this time: shading isn't smooth, doesn't have much depth--I plan on adding another layer of shadows and smoothing it out from there

also the planet looks meh (looks like a pancake according to some idiot) I gotta figure out how to make it look a lil more real

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102 Re: Mew Art on Wed Jul 11, 2012 10:11 pm

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The hand on our left is kinda wonky. Because of the angle his near finger is at it kinda squashes the sense of space in his palm. That brings his thumb forward like they're touching or like his hand is flipped.

My first thought about the planet was blue ice cream, but that's just me. Maybe recolor the land masses to a more earthy tone? And if those are waves maybe shrink or get rid of them since we probably wouldn't be able to see waves from such an altitude.

Uh, ya, you were staring at me so there.

Oh, oh, one more thing. Maybe add a touch of haze to the farthest parts of the planet. As things get farther away they get hazier and more blue. Maybe that will help it not be a pancake.

103 Re: Mew Art on Wed Jul 11, 2012 10:23 pm

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Yay thanks, I called and you answered! I appreciate it

I think the haze will certainly help after I add some more obvious land masses on the planet. They're not really supposed to be waves, more so just water affected by the color of the clouds above them (but at this moment I can see why they don't look cloud-like)

And yep you're right about the hand too, hopefully I'll be able to fix that just by how I shade it

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104 Re: Mew Art on Sat Jul 14, 2012 2:48 pm

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doop so how goes it

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105 Re: Mew Art on Sat Jul 14, 2012 5:55 pm

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arrchhh:


file quality kinda blows because of where im uploading it i think >_>



Last edited by Mewiyev on Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:22 pm; edited 2 times in total

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106 Re: Mew Art on Sat Jul 14, 2012 5:59 pm

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Preeetty....

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107 Re: Mew Art on Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:07 pm

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That picture is fucking enormous xD

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108 Re: Mew Art on Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:09 pm

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oopslol I'll update it with a smaller one in a few minutes

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109 Re: Mew Art on Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:17 pm

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If that picture gets any bigger, god will have to shove it over and make some room so he can sit down.

By "god" I mean "yoshi".

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110 Re: Mew Art on Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:20 pm

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resized it XD

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111 Re: Mew Art on Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:21 pm

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Oh good, now it's only half the size of the universe. ty

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112 Re: Mew Art on Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:49 pm

Jesse

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I liek.

113 Re: Mew Art on Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:14 pm

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new -- old

fixed crappy shading in hair and face, is this what you meant Klok? :V

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114 Re: Mew Art on Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:15 pm

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Yessss his hair was so undefined compared to the hair of Yoshi and Prime, this is significantly better.

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115 Re: Mew Art on Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:16 pm

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okie dokie, he matches them in general quite a bit better now. I'll add this version to the Dropbox

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116 Re: Mew Art on Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:27 pm

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Hmm. I'm a fan of the new jawline, but some of that shading on the face seems like a downgrade. Looking at the differences between the old and new, and comparing them to Yoshi/prime, I'd say the new jawline and hair are great, but the actual face shading looked better the old way. Maybe we can get Prime's opinion on this.

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117 Re: Mew Art on Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:24 am

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I'd have to see a bigger version of the picture to compare. It'd need to have all 3 of our heads otherwise I can only compare old Klok and new Klok and not if new Klok matches Yoshi and me.

118 Re: Mew Art on Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:39 am

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They're both in the dropbox in the MoH art folder, you can flip back and forth rapidly.

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119 Re: Mew Art on Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:27 pm

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Alright, so looking at Klok vs. Yoshi/Me I notice a something. I think the biggest reason that Klok doesn't mesh is the shading. His face shading is kind of splotchy and gives it like a free-hand painted feel. Yoshi and I have smoother shading that seems more in line with the FE GBA style.

It may also have to do with color choice. Yoshi and I seem a tad more saturated than Klok. But I think the shading style is likely the bigger culprit.

120 Re: Mew Art on Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:31 pm

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I see what you mean. I didn't notice the color before, but when I look at it now, I'm noticing how yellowy Klok's skin color is in comparison to you/Yoshi. If I edit that and smooth out the shading on his cheeks, I think that might finally solve it. I'll get to that soon. Thank you Very Happy

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121 Re: Mew Art on Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:33 pm

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Also, on the one in the dropbox, it looks like you removed the long hair on the medallion girl?

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122 Re: Mew Art on Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:35 pm

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I did? Oh god thanks for pointing that out. It's because I have multiple versions of this saved and I guess I was working on an older one, I'll fix that too :3

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123 Re: Mew Art on Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:50 pm

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Maybe you should start using version numbers then. Just to be safe Smile

124 Re: Mew Art on Thu Jul 19, 2012 11:32 am

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CAn i borrow this picture and use it as the background for my song?? Since I think the song will be implemented into MoH (not confirmed yet of course) I just need some sort of heroic/battle-like background I guess that can't be found on google XD

125 Re: Mew Art on Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:44 pm

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If you're going to upload it on a site like youtube or somewhere public, no. If it's for private use, sure.

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126 Re: Mew Art on Thu Jul 19, 2012 5:33 pm

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Magix's song would be a perfect Out of Combat theme for me. Very Happy

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