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1 Yoshi leveled up! on Sat Sep 17, 2011 7:48 pm

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Last attempt at a custom mug... Today...



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2 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Sat Sep 17, 2011 8:01 pm

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Thats a tiny FE head.

Looks proportionate though.

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3 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Sat Sep 17, 2011 8:25 pm

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Oh yeah you're right, it is a bit small... good catch...

Fix'd.


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4 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Sat Sep 17, 2011 10:17 pm

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Its pretty good, it just doesnt seem as Fire-Emblemy as it could be for some reason. Im not exactly sure whats wrong, it just seems....off.

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5 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Sat Sep 17, 2011 10:25 pm

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Is it because mine isn't as cartoony?


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6 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:55 pm

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First off, shading. The armor shading is lacking and it isn't even shaded at all in some parts. Like here. http://puu.sh/5LSS

The hair is flat, flat like a piece of paper, flat like wearing too much mousse to a first date, flat like a soda after you shake it all over your hot girlfriends naked body. The lines are all straight with no interesting randomness to them. Try asking a good hair spriter for some tips or reference some other FE mugs.

The trim is also flat, sorta 1 dimensional. Ask Conlimon for tips on making trim.

Other than that, I love the face! The face is a really great FE mug type of face, though IMO it would go better on say, a bishop aligned with evil, because he has that "I'm more righteous than you" look.

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7 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:58 pm

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MAYBE I SHOULD HAVE LABELED THIS AS A WIP.

Only the Hair and face were done. :V

And what the heck do you mean the hair is flat. It wasn't meant to be random, it's neatly combed. :I


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8 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Sun Sep 18, 2011 1:44 am

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yaaay. A FC without Aeo or Char guiding me throughhhh... still needs moar work.


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9 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Sun Sep 18, 2011 8:40 pm

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That last one is probably the best yet, but take away the bandage. Thatll make it the best.

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10 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Sun Sep 18, 2011 11:37 pm

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ML, were you hit on the head as a baby? Just wondering.

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11 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:58 am

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The hair on our right, I think it could use a few more pixels to indicate that the hair is conforming to the curve of his head. It looks kinda flat right now and should be more round.

12 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:19 pm

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No Klok, Im trying not to crush Yoshi into a metaphorical pulp, because you guys are doing that plenty already.

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13 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:24 pm

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I didn't say you were trying to crush him.

but onlee an idiot thinks da bandage is laem

Besides, he already has a character that smokes and a dude with a cowboy hat or something like that.

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14 Re: Yoshi leveled up! on Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:36 pm

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Eh...I guess a bandage just doesnt sit right with that face for some reason or other...

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