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26 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Tue Jun 26, 2012 9:18 pm

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here's my go at it (adding shirt/changes to armor+neck), not entirely sure if I made it better or worse 8D

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27 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Tue Jun 26, 2012 10:57 pm

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Mewshi tag team action right there.


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28 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Wed Jun 27, 2012 1:07 am

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Mewshi is the bestest. You two rock my socks.

29 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:04 am

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New something to rip apart. His name's O'Riley and he's a fighter.

30 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Thu Jul 12, 2012 12:24 pm

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He doesn't look built to be a fighter. That's the first thing that comes to mind.

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31 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Thu Jul 12, 2012 1:14 pm

Mew

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I think this one looks good :3 ML has a point about his shoulders not seeming bulky enough, but that's not terribly hard to fix when you can just drag around what's already there. He kinda looks piratey to me at the moment?

anyways things I circled:
-the fact that his eyebrow goes into his hair is pretty weird, like a werewolf or something
-the beard looks kinda messy here
-rough/unnecessary shading on the shirt

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32 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:04 pm

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I like this guy, he has more personality in his face than the entirety of all the FE6 characters combined! I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this one.

However, his face says "scraggly war torn veteran fighter" and his clothes say "professional goody two shoes" to me. They seem rather opposite to me.

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33 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:40 pm

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-the fact that his eyebrow goes into his hair is pretty weird, like a werewolf or something
Why do you pick on the Ganondorf hair-brows? XD
-rough/unnecessary shading on the shirt
I think I legit disagree. I say he needs more "random" shading on the shirt to give the idea of folds in the clothes, otherwise it looks too much like steel (unless this is a steel vest? O_O).

Honestly, I like the sprite, though I do think what has been said would be good to take to mind. Otherwise, I'm not sure what to add. Keep up the sexiness. c:

34 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:09 pm

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Adolf Klokler wrote:However, his face says "scraggly war torn veteran fighter" and his clothes say "professional goody two shoes" to me. They seem rather opposite to me.

Funny story: My bio for him is that he was a rough and ragged brawler back in the day and now he owns a bar. So maybe I hit the nail on the head?
IDK, Jill, you tell me.

Uh, I'll try doing the fixin'.

35 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:59 pm

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Gotta love a sprite with actual personality put into it x]

Keep doing what you do.

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36 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Thu Jul 12, 2012 11:18 pm

Primefusion

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Touch ups.

37 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Thu Jul 12, 2012 11:51 pm

Mew

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Perfection. I love this mug :v

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38 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Fri Jul 13, 2012 9:49 pm

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I'd probably add a fold on the (our) left side of the shirt, but that's just a suggestion and not even needed.

Very nice. c:

39 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 3:44 pm

Primefusion

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Alright, I need feedback on this gal. She's supposed to be a monk/tier 1 light magic user.

40 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:19 pm

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I don't like the colors on the cloak, something about them isn't contrasting right I think. I think her right eye OPV needs a little shading, maybe?

Nothing else otherwise jumps to mind.

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41 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:24 pm

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Oh I should have mentioned that the colors will most likely change. I just needed feedback on the sprite and any errors that jump out. Will try to fix the eye.

42 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:18 pm

Primefusion

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Alright, let's try this.

43 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:53 pm

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That dark goldish trim part is skewed pretty bad. Is that intentional?

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44 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:16 pm

Klokinator

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I think you altered the hair color and I kinda preferred the original hair color?

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45 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:47 pm

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<img src=" longdesc="64" /> wrote:That dark goldish trim part is skewed pretty bad. Is that intentional?
I have no idea what you mean with this.
Adolf Klokler wrote:I think you altered the hair color and I kinda preferred the original hair color?
I... didn't change the hair color at all.

46 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:40 pm

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This...it looks like the cloak thingy cuts the trim in half, and the bottom half is to the left far more than the top.

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47 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:48 pm

Primefusion

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That's just how Canas rolls, man.

48 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 9:48 pm

Mercenary Lord

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But you should try to fix it...

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49 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 10:15 pm

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I like it haha. I so suck at criticizing things... Huh.

50 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Mon Aug 13, 2012 11:44 pm

Primefusion

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Alright, let's try this color scheme + a few touch ups.


Also, how in the world did I get to making two sprites in one day?



She's going to be your new merchant. I'm trying to give her a little bit of a smile but it's not working out so well. :/

51 Re: Prime's Bad Sprites on Tue Aug 14, 2012 1:32 pm

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Her right eyebrow looks odd, and there's also eye shading problems again.

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