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26 Re: Parantheon on Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:38 am

Parantheon


Here's the prologue to Parantheon:

The king of Frandal has been very ill of late. He cannot get over his anger. The wood-elves have refused to let his soldiers use the woods for shelter.They are sure that the king's new interest in their woods has nothing to do with his troops needing shelter. They are positive that his interest is for some other reason, but they are not quite sure what.
His majesty has decided to send his four best pupils to talk to the wood-elves, and they are to try and coax them into giving him their woods. Along with his pupils, he is sending his four best royal guards to protect them.
The royal guards are to take them over the mountains to the west of Frandal. Once there, they will try to convince the elves to allow King Toren's troops safe passage and shelter.
The pupils, however, will soon find out that the guards that are protecting them have a dark and deadly secret all their own.

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27 Re: Parantheon on Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:01 am

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That is NOT a prologue. That is the kind of paragraph that would be on the back of a book.

If you so please, because I'm the bestest person ever, I could show you some things that MIGHT help you with your book.

Jesse knows, Ive been editing his book for six months or so.

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28 Re: Parantheon on Mon Nov 07, 2011 6:18 pm

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I'd attempt to make this into a true Prologue, but I'd need names and personalities.

By the way, ML can offer some pretty good advice, and I believe he can be trusted. He's my official unofficial editor.

29 Re: Parantheon on Tue Nov 08, 2011 5:49 pm

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Paran brought a revised Prologue to school today that was much better. I've been helping him with editing it, so it may be uploaded soon(by him, of course).

30 Re: Parantheon on Tue Nov 08, 2011 7:37 pm

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Sweet, I can help once he does.

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31 Re: Parantheon on Tue Nov 08, 2011 11:14 pm

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*removes glasses dramatically*

My. God.


It's beautiful.

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32 Re: Parantheon on Tue Nov 08, 2011 11:58 pm

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Looks like-

*puts on sunglasses*

That's a pro log for your ideas, but not an actual prologue.

AWWWWWWW YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAH!

Cool


Total epic fail...

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33 Re: Parantheon on Fri Nov 25, 2011 1:50 pm

Parantheon

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I'll have the new prologue up here for you guys next time I get on the site. I don't know when that will be. It might be next week, or it might be later. I don't know.

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34 Re: Parantheon on Fri Nov 25, 2011 11:38 pm

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Gagh.

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